East Village - Critique Feedback
I got some feedback from tutors about the current state of the east village project. the logo is good but could be more distinct, sort of looks like an existing logo for a club in leeds? The high quantity of black in the designs almost gives a nightclub vibe as opposed to a more refined cocktail bar. The hatch show print research was good, but its not particularly applicable to Dive Bars. Maybe dive bars need to be researched more. Add in some colour - this will steer away from the nightclub feel of the designs. Colour can reference neon signs from dive bars. Type spacing in logo - the type in the logo isn’t spaced within the half oval as neatly as it could be because of the “the’ could this be dropped from the name altogether? The star idea works well, but the 4 pointed star doesn’t resemble a star well enough, play around with some more designs. Thinking more about dive bars, how can the branding be more appropriate. East Village doesn’t want to be too well known...