Improper - Poster Initial Ideas



While Ella was figuring out the format of the poster zine and where all the content would go, I decided to make a start on the poster; this seemed like a good idea because I could more freely put ideas and concepts down into a composition and get feedback on them, and then whichever way the poster ended up going, that could inform the visual identity and language of the the whole project. 






Considering the theme of ‘sexy’ I started incorporating mirrors as a concept into some of these designs, I think they’re a good representation of the idea of people judging their own looks or their own bodies which obviously is very applicable to this theme. I also played around with the idea of eyes in a mirror, almost like someone looking at themselves in the mirror. I also added in this picture of a hand; with the subject matter, I wanted their to be at least a bit of an organic element to the poster and hands are quite an evocative body part because of their function.

The feedback I got on these posters was:

  • oval mirror shapes work well
  • Logos look good
  • Colour gradients work well, brighter more inviting
  • Eyes - good idea, look too feminine?


With this feedback I’m going to develop some more posters and in doing so hopefully get a better idea of the whole visual language. Im also going to try and develop and finish the logo. 

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